Tuesday, 27 October 2015

Jim's Story (PG)

Once upon a time there was a boy named Jim, he was a very strange boy because at school he kept talking a different language everyday. There was a bully, he had a scar on his arm and he hated Jim. When Jim went to the principal after school the bully came with him. The bully got in BIG trouble with the principal. That bully was told not to mess with Jim again. The bully's name was Jack, but his friends called him Big Jack. After that Jack punched Jim in the face, Jim screamed in pain, after all he was a weed! When Jack punched Jim in the face Jim did the same!!! Then a big fight came Jack v.s Jim. The other students did NOT help at all. All they said was: Fight! Fight! Fight! Finally the principal heard all the noise and said: WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON!? Everybody became silent very silent. The principal saw Jack and Jim with LOTS of bruises. The principal's name was Mr. Wazza. Mr. Wazza EXPELLED Jack and SUSPENDED Jim for 5 weeks! That is Jim's Story, leave a comment if you enjoyed it!😃  
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9 comments:

  1. Oli27 October 2015 at 03:33

    Guys I worked VERY hard on this story so please leave a comment😉

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  2. Sarah Hodgson27 October 2015 at 05:14

    Dear Lion Knight,
    I think you did a good job of your story. I'm wondering which languages Jim was able to speak!
    He must be very clever to speak a different language every day! I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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  3. Sarah Hodgson27 October 2015 at 05:15

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  4. heatbog27 October 2015 at 05:27

    Dear Lion Knight,
    What a suspenseful story you've written. I'm glad to see that the principal didn't put up with the boys' poor choices. Do you think you'll write any other adventures of Jim and Jack?

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  5. Damien27 October 2015 at 05:32

    Dear Lion Knight (what a fantastic name for a writer, by the way),
    I really loved this story and I hope that there will be plenty of others !

    From, Moscow Bear

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  6. Anonymous27 October 2015 at 15:23

    Great story Lion Knight. I'm glad the bully got expelled. I'm looking forward to the next chapter already!

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  7. Anonymous28 October 2015 at 00:39

    Dear Lion Knight,
    I really enjoyed reading your story. Maybe when Jim gets bullied next time he can tell the bully to leave him alone in the different languages he knows and then the bully will be so confused Jim can then run away. :-)

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  8. Unknown28 October 2015 at 04:18

    Dear Lion Knight,
    Please continue writing stories like this. It's interesting to me! I wonder if there is a story behind why Jack became a bull.? .. Can't wait for Chapter 2!! Will they ever become good friends, I wonder?!

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